FionaTheDream's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Underground Monsters]

I have to say, it does sound like it'd fit right in with the Undertale OST. Although some development in the melody or chord progression would make it a lot more interesting. Maybe also throw in some larger shifts in intensity just to keep the song moving in a direction. Other than that, the mixing is done decently, and the synths sound like they're straight from Undertale.

SharpenedSwords responds:

Hey, thanks for the feedback! I was thinking about making an extended version, so I'll keep that in mind.

[Worn]

There's a bit of distortion from 0:08 - 0:31 from overlapping frequencies, some equalization work could be done there. The melody is a bit muddy around the middle section and I think some compression work could be done. As far as motion the track definitely has sections of higher and lower intensity, which keep it interesting. Could use some more interesting melodies or chord progressions though, and a lot of mixing work needs to be done.

[Telaris & Defect Omega - Salvation (WIP)]

The chord progression is fairly interesting. The claps starting at 0:11 are way too loud. The stutter effects (0:35 for example) are an interesting concept, although I think it needs some tweaking to sound less like buffering and more like a fast moving pick perhaps? The pauses are a bit too abrupt. The transition at 1:48 was pretty unique and interesting. I think the drums at 1:53 are slightly distorting the melody causing a sort of unintentional side-chaining effect. The change at 2:28 is alright, although I think more build up would be nice for such an impact. I also think at least a slight chord progression or at least melodic change would make the track a less monotony. From this point on it just sounds like the same melody and chords played on different synths. The ending leaves a lot to be desired. Overall, there are some unique elements but I think some more work needs to be done on the composition, specifically adding variation to the melodies or harmonies.

Telaris responds:

Up until 2:27 was made by my Collaborator (I made the chords and melody, he did the rest)

I will not change up the Drop but maybe the Main verse

(IDK)

[tri - luna]

The ambiance and atmosphere is very pronounced in this track. Though I think the part at 0:34 - 1:57 could do with a lower kick, because while I like the sort of marble tapping, I don't think it should be emphasized as much as it is. The transition at 1:57 is done really nicely, and the section from 1:57 - 3:22 is mixed fairly well, although some overlapping distortion is audible. The transition at 3:22 is a bit abrupt, but I do like the softer tone as the track ends, and the bird calls really add to the atmosphere. Overall, this is a terrific ambient track.

monikrr responds:

Thank you so much <3

Having a kick during the 0:34 - 1:57 part is actually a really good idea; I probably should've done that in the first place lol
Also, the transition at the end is intentionally abrupt, but I probably should've led up to it a bit better instead of leaving practically zero warning that it was coming.

[[Ethereal Waves 06] : Κένωση (Kenosis)]

The intro is vibrant, and the build up to 0:41 is done fairly well. I think cutting some of the higher overtones on the bass would be beneficial during the build up there. The drop at 0:41 is satisfying, although there's clear distortion from frequency interference on some of the synths. I'd recommend separating their frequencies a bit more with an equalizer so you don't get that distortion (from 0:41 to 1:23) At 1:23 the distortion is even more pronounced, and I think the main culprit is the bass. Reducing some of the overtones here would give the lead room to breath and probably give the kick more impact as well. 1:45 - 2:04 is nice for development and direction in the track, and it isn't distorted as far as I can tell. At 2:04 the frequencies once again overlap each other which is why it sounds like they're all fighting for attention. The distortion persists to 3:48. As far as endings go, this once seems kind of abrupt. I think some decline or resolution here would go a long way. Overall the melodies and motion are great, just needs some equalizing work done to stop the frequencies from interfering with each other so much.

[Wormhole]

The intro and build up to the first drop are very clear and well mixed. The first drop is satisfying and bringing in the intro melody was a nice touch. This section is very nicely mixed although a bit repetitive. The transition at 1:00 is done pretty well, with just enough noticeable fade on the leads so it isn't too abrupt. The part from 1:00 - 1:40 is a bit monotonous and feels kind of like the intro just drawn out longer. The 2nd drop, while slightly different from the first, reuses many of the same sounds which adds to the repetitive nature of the track, whether that's a good thing or bad I don't know. The ending is a bit sudden, but again is very similar to the transition at 1:00 just cut after 2 measures (or, 4 I suppose since it's 192 BPM instead of 96). Overall the track is well mixed and has decent direction to it, but I think a bit more variation in melody, chord progression, and/or synth timbre could go a long way here.

ClockbeatAdelony87 responds:

Thanks for the feedback! :D

[Tennobyte - Time Bend]

The intro is well mixed and does a good job setting up the atmosphere and building up to the first drop. The chords are basic but that's alright. The first drop is satisfying, although I think it could be built up to a bit more intensely for a better effect. I think more variation in the growls or lead would help break up the monotony from 0:35 - 1:09. 1:09 - 1:43 could use some more defining characteristics for the section so the track isn't so samey. The drop at 2:01 isn't quite as satisfying, probably because of the lack of low overtones in the bass after the drop. 2:37 - 2:54 has that variation keeping it interesting which is a nice change. However some more decline before the ending would be beneficial for the track. Overall, the track is very well mixed, just could use some more varying chords, melodies, or motion to keep it interesting throughout.

Tennobyte responds:

Thx for your honest opinion :D.

[DXZX - Great Journey]

Beautifully played! The chords are intriguing and the melodies are captivating. Perfectly captures the atmosphere of a long trek. The song also has amazing motion and direction to it, keeping it interesting throughout. The motion and direction does seem to disappear a bit in the 2nd half as the song doesn't really change much in intensity through the various key shifts as well as the chord progression as far as I can tell (aside from of course the key being changed, but I mean relative progression). That's really the only critique here, the piece is beautifully made and wonderfully played and the motion picks up by the end (4:57). The ending is fitting and resolved for the genre. Overall absolutely spectacular work!

DXZX responds:

THANK YOU SO MUCH. I really apreciate your honest opinion. It makes me work harder on my project's

[Blue Plaid (Electric Knightmare)]

The high overtones in the intro are a bit jarring to the ears, maybe cut some of them out with an equalizer. Melodies could use some work just to get them to flow a bit better and make them more memorable. As far as mixing, it's done alright. The saw chords do sound nice and the drums don't interfere with the synths which don't interfere with each other much. Overall it just lacks motion in mix and melody, making it a mite monotonous.

[offcall-on]

It has a nice upbeat feel to it, could use some work cleaning up the synths. There's some overlapping frequencies causing distortion at 0:50 - 1:00, and for the rest of the track I'd recommend having treble and bass synths playing simultaneous with a wide range of frequencies to get a fuller sound. There's some more distortion at 1:47, and the ending just kind of happens without anything anticipating it or resolving the synths.

Super-shape responds:

thank you for your review. unfortunately i am not skilled enough to know what any of this means so i don't really find most of this criticism to be that helpful. on another note, i am fully aware that the ending was rushed and it was done like that because i spend more time on songs that i am proud of. i was hesitant to upload this song for related reasons.